Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts

Sunday, January 29, 2017

Feedback Thoughts





https://hbr.org/2016/10/using-harsh-feedback-to-fuel-your-career
http://ideas.ted.com/why-rejection-hurts-so-much-and-what-to-do-about-it/
https://ww2.kqed.org/mindshift/2015/03/10/the-difference-between-praise-that-promotes-narcissism-vs-healthy-self-esteem/
https://www.brainpickings.org/2013/05/23/stephen-grosz-examined-life/

I think it's a very interesting point that the best way to take feedback is to try to not react emotionally towards receiving it. It's so easy to be hurt and offended when feedback is received and automatically assume the worst intentions in the people giving it to you. But that's not the point of feedback. I think that the "Using Harsh Feedback to Fuel Your Career" article was the most helpful towards me. I tend to automatically let my emotions dictate how I feel about receiving feedback and I think it's important to know that that's not the intention. I also thought it was interesting that giving praise over working hard is more emphasized and more important than giving praise over accomplishments. This is something I hadn't really considered too much honestly. I haven't been in too many situations where I've had to give/receive a lot of feedback, but I'm sure I will in future jobs, so I think it's important to learn how to do it now.

Wednesday, January 25, 2017

Week 2 Story: The Rise of Achilles



Achilles was born into extraordinary circumstances. It was prophesied long before his birth that his mother, Thetis, would bear a child much stronger than his father. Many gods feared to bear children with Thetis, in fear of creating too strong of a being. However, Achilles’ father was an extraordinarily strong man, king of many people.
When Achilles was just a baby, his mother tried to make him immortal by dipping him in the river Styx. However, she missed a small part on his ankle, his only weakness. That hardly stopped Achilles from rising to greatness at a young age, though.
Achilles quickly became the greatest fighter in all of Greece. He spent a lot of his younger years around the soldiers, and learned how to use a sword and all sorts of other weapons. When Achilles was just ten years old, he could win a sword fight with every member of the Greek army.
When Achilles was twelve, he officially joined the army anytime they went to battle. This was significantly younger than most soldiers had to be before joining the army. There was one battle in particular where Achilles really showed his strength and prowess. Greek had been fighting with Messenia for many years. Achilles had been begging his father to send him to join the fighting. Despite his best efforts to keep his son safe, Peleus knew that Achilles could really help their fight in Messenia and reluctantly sent him.
When Achilles first arrived, there was no clear winner. He rounded the troops and came up with a strategy. They would withdraw, regroup, and attack from their undefended side. The journey to the other side of Messenia would take longer than most men were willing to do, but Achilles was able to convince the soldiers that their best bet was to try and attack Messenia from where they weren’t expecting it.
The soldiers set off on their journey, making it longer than necessary to ensure that they would arrive undetected. Upon their arrival in the early morning, they were detected by a few guards. Achilles sprang forward, slaying both of them with the single pull of his sword. The Greek soldiers quietly spread throughout Messenia, leaving destruction and death in their wake.
Achilles, however, took mercy on those who were not involved in the battle. He didn’t harm any of the older men, women, or children. Quickly and quietly, the Greek soldiers made their way to the middle of the town where the king of the Messenia lay sleeping. Upon Achilles entering into his bedchamber, the King awoke with a start.
The King could hardly believe that a mere twelve year old boy lead the successful siege of his town after the fighting had gone on for so long with no clear shift of power. The King asked who Achilles was and Achilles replied with pride, “Achilles, son of Peleus, here to accept your surrender.”
The King had no choice; the soldiers had clearly won the battle and destroyed Messenia. The King gave his surrender to Achilles and Achilles brought back the Greek soldiers to Sparta, victorious. Ever since that win in Messenia, Achilles was the most respected soldier in all of Greece.

Author's Note: The Iliad is a story of the Greeks attacking the Trojans to retrieve their beloved Helen. The story is full of great fights, heroism, and love. When reading the Iliad, my favorite character was immediately Achilles. Not only was he a great fighter, but he loved and cared for his friends, and was merciful towards his enemies. I chose to write about Achilles' rise because I thought he was an interesting character that must've had a pretty interesting backstory.
Caption: A statue of Achilles in Hyde Park. https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Achilles_Statue,_Hyde_Park_in_March_2011.jpg.
Bibliography: Homer's The Iliad. http://mythfolklore.blogspot.com/2014/05/iliad-rousing-of-achilles.html.

Tuesday, January 24, 2017

Reading Notes: Homer's Iliad Part B


I think that Hector is being rational when he says he doesn't fear men, but he does fear Zeus. I feel for Achilles; his pain and sadness seem very fitting and I can understand why he is so upset over the death of his friend and why he blames himself. Achilles is a very trusting man; he's brave and smart to put his trust in the gods. I think it'd be scary running to battle without any arms. 
Apollo does seem mischievous. All the other gods seem to have a purpose in mind when interfering in the lives of mortals. I would be mad if I were Achilles too. I like Achilles a lot; I think he could be an interesting main character for my story. 
It does seem a little too much to me that Achilles attached Hector to his chariot and dragged him behind. I think that Achilles made the right decision to give Hector's body back to his father. 

Bibliography: Homer's the Iliad. http://mythfolklore.blogspot.com/2014/05/iliad-rousing-of-achilles.html.

Reading Notes: Homer's Iliad Part A

Nine years is a long time to try to break through the city's walls to no avail; this could be an interesting point of writing. I could explore some of what happened in those nine long years. Also, the princes seem to be very loyal to be away for that long.
I agree with Achilles; Agamemnon seems to be very selfish and unconcerned for the wellbeing of those fighting for the king of Sparta. Achilles seems very wise after speaking with Athena. He appears to be handling Agamemnon's selfishness quite well.
It seems funny to me that the gods and goddesses all have favorite humans for their own reasons, and help them.



Bibliography: Homer's The Iliad.http://mythfolklore.blogspot.com/2014/05/iliad-hector-and-andromache.html.
Caption: A scene from The Iliad. https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:The_story_of_the_Iliad_(1911)_(14596485307).jpg.